Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Tuesday, 19 Febraury

Six rough draft poems are due on Thursday, 21 February.

Two final draft (and four rough draft) poems are due on Tuesday, 26 February.

Class began with making lists of memorable sounds. Writers then chose one of these sounds as a prompt.

We later read "Poetry" by Pablo Neruda, and then used the poem as a prompt for our own writing.

Last semesters final projects were passed out for review by the authors, then collected for portfolios.

Writers had time to conference.

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Writers made a list of people and things they loved. Choosing something from this list they then wrote about it for the opening prompt.

Mr. Zartler shared a variety of love poems with the class, and writers then tried emulating one of these poems for a subject of their own love (or hate).

Mr. Zartler reviewed the requirement of having six rough drafts of poems by the 21st. Two final drafts will be due on the 26th (this is an extension to the original due dates).

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Monday/ Tuesday 11-12 February

On Monday writers studied and emulated the poem "9th and Hennepin" by Tom Waits.

On Tuesday the prompt was "I am not...."

Then writers read and discussed the poem "Hands." The class considered sound, metaphor, and the structure of the poem.

Writer's then tried to write a poem in the format of a negative statement.

Mr. Zartler retaught a lesson on the structure of feature magazine articles; any writer who did not yet receive credit for annotating the structure of a feature magazine article should bring that to class on Thursday.

1st semester final projects will be returned on Thursday.

Thursday, February 7, 2013

February, 4,5, 7

Class this week had two goals.

1) To continue analysis of feature magazines for content and style, and to analyze these articles to better understand the kinds of question that lead to the writing of the article.

2) To begin a poetry unit. The poetry unit will require writers to submit during the week of February 19th drafts on approximately six assigned poems, plus two revised Final Versions of poems.

On Monday

Class began  with the prompt: “My passion is…”

Writers read and discussed Anne Lamott’s “Brocolli”

Writers read and studied Komunyakaa’s “Slam, dunk, & Hook” 

then writers looked at the writing they did for the prompt today searching for lines that were poetic or inspiring in order to attempt to write a poem in a similar form to "Slam, dunk, & Hook"

On Tuesday
Prompt: “I remember….”
Students received a handout on poetry, please see Mr. Zartler for a copy.
Then
Poetry model for Tuesday “Venus-flytraps” by Komunyakaa
Writers then  read, discussed, and compared the formating  to his “Slam, Dunk, & Hook”
The writers tried to write a poem in the format “I am… formatted poem like Venus-flytraps”

On Thursday the class worked together to annotate an article called "How Chicken Conquered the World". Then using their own feature magazine article were to annotate that article as homework due Monday. Writers who missed this class should come to Tutorial Period on Tuesday the 12th.

The poetry models for the day are available on youtube
Blink Your Eyes Sekou Sundiata

A modern “love” poem (prep for one F-bomb)
"Shallow Thoughts" - Spoken Word Poetry - Pierre Marc Paras

“Verselandia PPS Poetry Slam Winning Poet”
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gJ-sdQzaxLQ

here is another one of Lauren Steele’s work
UPSET Rally Lauren Steele Spoken Word

Writers then tried to write Spoken Word poems.




Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Thursday, 17 January, 2013

There was a musical prompt about sunshine to begin class.

Next writers worked with peers to identify a "key scene" in their story draft. 
Each writer then had to change one aspect of this scene and revise the scene to see how this change would change the story.

These changes are due on Tuesday.

Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Tuesday, 14 January, 2013

HOMEWORK:
A complete rough draft of a piece of fiction, or creative non-fiction (possibly humorous) is due on Thursday. 

In class writers wrote to the prompt: "My father doesn't know...."

After sharing the class finished discussing "Chiasmus".

Next students read the piece "Writing About What Haunts Us."

After reading the piece writers wrote a personal response addressing their personal reaction as well as insight into writing that the piece offers.

Writers discussed the piece first in small groups, then we discussed as a whole class.

Monday, January 14, 2013

Monday, 14 January

Reminder: Rough drafts of a semester final project are due on Thursday.

The prompt for beginning class was, "I think I am adopted...."

Writers shared something they had written recently.

Then we read and analyzed the short story "Chiasmus" by Fan Li.