Thursday, November 10, 2011

Wednesday / Monday 9 /14 November

Class was focused around the study of toasts on Wednesday. Any writer who was absent should get an handout from Mr. Zartler.

However writers also discussed chapters in Writing Down the Bones that had been useful (or not) to them.

After discussing the information provided in the handouts about toasts and Mr. Zartler's comments about the material, the class watched parts of the following videos in order to asses what was done well, and what needed to change in the following toasts.

Monday, November 7, 2011

Monday / Tuesday 8/9 November

In class writers made a list of things that they are grateful or thankful for.

Then writers choose one of these things and wrote in detail about why.

Mr. Zartler reminded the writers that next week they will be completing a toast. He also indicated that there would be a visual project based on the lessons of Natalie Goldberg announced after the Thanksgiving Break. Writers should read at least three of her essays for the next class.

Writers received a packet of reading materials, and read and discussed some of the pieces.

Writers were asked to read the news story "Raising Chorizo" and the essay "Killing Dinner", and to write a half page response for the next class period.

Details will be added Tuesday morning.

Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Tuesday / Wednesday 11/1/11 and 11/2/11

Writers began with a free write focused on a time they are something.

After sharing, writers made a list of things that they had eaten. At the end of the time provided, writers marked unusual things with an *. We then shared the items without *s, and added to our lists.

Writers then wrote about what they had learned from sharing these lists. We discussed the observations and learnings. The activity was repeated for the unusual items marked with an *.

Mr. Zartler then talked about the unit. Writer's will be writing and giving a toast in class on the 17th or 18th of November. Writers will also write a restaurant review; this writing does not require going to an expensive restaurant, or even to a restaurant, but that is one fun way to approach the assignment. Mr. Zartler pointed out that people think about food often, but not necessarily with any depth or analysis. Food is an important part of our social and religious lives (as well as being necessary for survival). Many jobs are in some way related to food or to eating. Mr. Zartler encouraged writers to A) eat something that they have never eaten before during this unit B) cook something that they have never cooked before C) to think about food, eating, and the role of food in our culture analytically.

Writers created a chart of what they know about food; what they wonder about food; and what they would like to learn about food.

The class read an article from the March 4th, 2008 Asian Reporter newspaper, "Insect eating promoted for everyone, from famine victims to astronauts." A similar news story can be found here Students discussed the article and  Mr. Zartler gave a brief lecture on "Trophic Levels."


HOMEWORK: Writers were reminded to continue to write in their spirals at least five nights a week. They were encouraged to use food as a way to prompt their writing.

Friday / Monday 28/31 October

In class writers read their pieces aloud.

Then they wrote a self-evaluation. The self-evaluation addressed: strengths, weakness, the grade the writer believes he or she earned, and any comments about the unit.

Students then turned in a packet with their morbid fiction on top, their conferencing sheet and response to the conferencing sheet, and their self-evaluation.

Writers were asked to bring Writing Down the Bones to class for the next few weeks.

Thursday, October 27, 2011

Important Reminder!


Important clarification:
The rule for paragraphing dialogue--
 is NOT: begin a new paragraph every time someone speaks.
 it IS: begin a new paragraph every time the speaker CHANGES.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Wednesday/ Thursday 26/27 October

Important clarification:
The rule for paragraphing dialogue--
 is NOT: begin a new paragraph every time someone speaks.
 it IS: begin a new paragraph every time the speaker CHANGES.

Writers first got the following handout on editing marks.
Then periods 4 and 5 got back their first short stories.
Mr. Zartler apologized to period 6 that he had not responded to all of their papers yet. Any writer who has problems on their Morbid Fiction that they also had on their first paper will be allowed to edit / revise the morbid fiction piece and resubmit for a higher grade once they get their first story back.

After writers had time to review their pieces and Mr. Zartler's comments about them, Mr. Zartler used examples of student writing to teach common problems, as wells as to show examples of excellent writing. In particular writers need to be aware of, and focus on, properly formatted and punctuated dialogue.

Students read an story rich in figurative language and motifs of death and dying called "In the South."

MORBID FICTION IS DUE 
FRIDAY 28 OCTOBER or MONDAY 31 OCTOBER

Monday / Tuesday 24/25 October

The writing prompt for the day began as a coordinate plane. Here are two examples. After filling in examples for each quadrant writers choose one or more examples to write about. The suggestion was that they choose an example that could be part of a new scene in the Morbid Fiction piece that is due Friday/ Monday.


Next students received the following conferencing protocol. Writers must include this sheet, and their response to the prompt at the bottom of the sheet with their finished morbid story.
Writers received credit for having a rough draft with them.

All writers were told to begin to bring Writing Down the Bones with them to class.